Homecoming and Short Sightseeing Part 2

Aug 14, 2016 00:30
Today, I'd like to write the remaining part of yesterday's post.

The second sightseeing spot where I visited was "Unagi Pie Factory."

Unagi means eels, and unagi pie is confectionery created by kneading eel powders into pie dough, which is popular as a souvenir in Shizuoka Prefecture.
(It doesn't have a taste of eels at all.)

At the Unagi Pie Factory, you can see and learn the manufacturing process of unagi pie.

Although it was a short factory tour, I was fun.

I bought a lot of unagi pie as a souvenir.

After that, I returned home, then played with my nephew and niece.

Since I also played with them, I'm exhausted.
帰省と軽い観光 Part 2

今日は、昨日の投稿の続きを書きます。

帰省の途中で寄った二つ目の観光地は、うなぎパイファクトリーです。

うなぎパイはうなぎパウダーをパイ生地に練り込んだ洋菓子で、静岡のおみやげとして人気があります。
（うなぎの味は全くしません。）

うなぎパイファクトリーでは、うなぎパイの製造工程を見学して、学ぶことができます。

とても短い工場見学でしたが、楽しかったです。

おみやげに大量のうなぎパイを買いました。

その後は実家に戻り、甥っ子と姪っ子と遊びました。

今日も沢山、彼らと遊んでくたくたです。
No. 1　YuriK02's correction
  • Homecoming and Short Sightseeing Part 2
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Today, I'd like to write the remaining part of yesterday's post.
  • Today, I'd like to continue writing about the remaining part of yesterday's post.
  • The second sightseeing spot where I visited was "Unagi Pie Factory."
  • The second sightseeing spot where I visited was the "Unagi Pie Factory."
  • Unagi means eels, and unagi pie is confectionery created by kneading eel powders into pie dough, which is popular as a souvenir in Shizuoka Prefecture.
  • Unagi means eels, and Unagi pie is a confectionery created by kneading eel powders into a pie dough, which is popular as a souvenir in Shizuoka Prefecture.
  • (It doesn't have a taste of eels at all.)
  • (It doesn't have the taste of eels at all.)
  • At the Unagi Pie Factory, you can see and learn the manufacturing process of unagi pie.
  • At the Unagi Pie Factory, you can see and learn the manufacturing process of how Unagi pie is made.
  • Although it was a short factory tour, I was fun.
  • Although it was a short factory tour, it was fun.
  • I bought a lot of unagi pie as a souvenir.
  • I bought a lot of Unagi pie as a souvenir.
  • After that, I returned home, then played with my nephew and niece.
  • After that, I returned home, then and played with my nephew and niece.
  • Since I also played with them, I'm exhausted.
  • Since Because I also played with them, I am exhausted.
Good overall!
Toru
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :)
No. 2　wellington2k's correction
Sounds like a fun trip! Do the pies taste good? Eel pies sound... interesting. Haha!
Toru
Thank you for the comment!
Yes, the name might sound a little... eerie.
However, it's just a sweet crispy pie :)
wellington2k
That sounds delicious! One day, I'd love to have the opportunity to try one. Perhaps I'll be able to, if I manage to get to Japan next summer.
No. 3　josh's correction
  • Today, I'd like to write the remaining part of yesterday's post.
  • Today, I'd like to write the remaining part of continue writing from yesterday's post.
  • At the Unagi Pie Factory, you can see and learn the manufacturing process of unagi pie.
  • At the Unagi Pie factory, you can see and learn the manufacturing process of Unagi pies.
  • Although it was a short factory tour, I was fun.
  • Although it was a short factory tour, I had fun.
  • Since I also played with them, I'm exhausted.
  • Since I also played with them, I'm exhausted.
    　I would say, "Playing with them, in addition to the factory tour earlier, made me exhausted."
I love unagi and I think I would actually like a savoury unagi pie. ^.^;
Toru
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
I like both of unagi and unagi pies, but they have completely different tastes. Please try it if you have a chance :)
josh
I would definitely try it, if I get a chance to!
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